Heres my improved version hope you all think the same. Ive tweaked the start of the clip so closed looks more like its flying into the distance once its hit the wall. Out of my videos this is the one that has more of a 'personality'. Closed has been given a quality, its frustrated and aggresive to the wall, something which i think makes the video more interesting. Never before have i managed to make helvetica seem aggressive, its interesting how motion can do this.