Changed the word bee to a bold sans serif font ensuring each letter has plenty of kerning so the word is read for longer. Rather then having it with a bigger pt size and being too present.

I thought a grainy typeface for the word bee would be effective but i in fact think it derives from the rest of the sentence. The word needs to be fairly intense and bold but i think how it is, is too far.

Below is my first attempt at my next Ali poster. Above i've changed the sans serif typeface to serif for the word 'float'. I've done this so it has a more graceful feel to it which is what it should be said like