Again printed off pages to analyse readability and see how it looks off screen. Overall think its working much better. Next stage is to start looking at stocks and colour!

Ive applied my idea of making the screws solid colours which i think works brilliantly compared to the other images. Looks much more interesting. Also rather then having images on the page and text on the page ive begun to play with how the two may correspond and interlink.
Within the grid ive begun looking at scale of the images to see how i can make the page more engaging. I need to play with the images, maybe changing them from lineal images to solid colours.
I've increased both leading and the kerning on the above page which always the eye to fly over the words a little easier ive found. However as a piece of design i don't think its working, i need to re look at the images which are fully bland currently. I do like the grid that im using as i think it gives a good sense of order.
Printed above two pages off to analyse their readability and simply how visually interesting they are.