Above and below ive been trying different typefaces to see what may work with the composition. Quite simply none of them are working.



Although i think the type and the illustrations work on some level they don't work with the grid and layout of the page. Its becoming apparent that a contemporary looking layout simply can't work with a serif font.
Decided the below typeface needs scraping, i need a new tone of voice to make this work. Above ive completely changed to a serif font that has a similar tone to the illustrations.

Printing of pages then seeing how i can make them more interesting by drawing on the screws in the same tone as before.

Above im playing with layout using different grids.