I've started re-drawing my storyboards now, looking more into how i want the type to flow on the screen and looking at its relationship with the images.

The problem with my previous storyboards is that they were way too image driven, i was trying to tell a story with still images which didnt look good and didnt work well which can be seen in my first 2 ident attempts. I want the type to play a much bigger role, its as important as the images, probably more.